Proto:Serious Sam: The First Encounter/Test 1/Text/Enemies

Beheaded Rocketeer
Its perception has been changed from “unsentient” to “insentient”, there are no “a”s or “the”s before words, and the final sentence has “They're” added to the start of the sentence.

Beheaded Bomber
“Unsentient” changed to “insentient” and a lack of “a”s and “the”s before words that would need them. The only unique difference is that “The Beheaded Bomber” has been added to the start of the tip.

Beheaded Firecracker
The usual change to “insentient” and lack of “a”s and “the”s, but this time there are a few differences unique to this enemy. A “He” has been added to the start of the second sentence in the second paragraph, and a “They” has been added to front of the last sentence.

Beheaded Kamikaze
“Unsentient” to “Insentient” again and there is no “an” in front of the first sentence in Test 1, but there is an actual wording difference this time around; the first sentence in the second paragraph uses “recruited” in Test 1, but “employed” in the final version. The proto description makes it sound like someone walked up to him after his head was cut off and asked him to join the Anti-Serious Sam Brigade, while the final makes it sound like someone refitted the body after being beheaded. The last sentence also has a missing “the” in front of “target” in Test 1.

Male Gnaar
The description has been reworded to make it flow better, and the tips have no capitalization in Test 1.

Female Gnaar
There is no “the” in front of the first sentence in Test 1 and the description has undegone the same rewriting that the Male Gnaar's description went through. An “s” was added to the end of “specimen” in the last tip between Test 1 and the final version.

Kleer
An “an” was added in front of the first sentence in the final, the word “at” in front of “Alpha Canis Majoris” has been changed to “of” to be grammatically correct, and the last sentence in the first paragraph has an “It” added to the start of it in the final version.

Sirian Werebull
The word “cross-breed” has had its tense changed and the hyphen removed, “The Werebull” was added to the start of the second sentence, the second and third sentences have been merged and rewritten in the final version, and the mention of the Werebull's close range melee attack was removed in the final version.

Red Arachnoid
The first sentence lacks an “a” in front of it in test 1, and and “It” was added to the start of the second paragraph.

Red Biomechanoid
The only differences are is a lack of an “A” in the start of the first paragraph and the tips are not capitalized.

Harpy
The Harpy has no description file in Test 1.