Proto:Pikmin 2/Treasure Hoard Entries/Sales Pitches

While there are a lot of changes here, there aren't nearly as many as in Olimar's notes.

Interesting Changes
Significant changes, additions, and deletions.

014 - Toxic Toadstool
This description was rewritten significantly.

015 - Growshroom
Like Olimar's description, the demo's text makes the connection to Super Mario Bros. clearer.

019 - Arboreal Frippery
The scope of leafiness was lessened greatly in the final script.

037 - Pale Passion
The ship changes from hypothetically brushing its teeth to hypothetically eating the thing.

038 - White Goodness
The earlier description has a different name for the sweet tooth series.

039 - Chocolate Cushion
A blatant plea for children pondering was added to the final script.

058 - Shiny Disc
This description was spiced up considerably.

060 - Milk Tub
The earlier group name appears again.

062 - Broken Food Master
The description was changed so that the ship mentioned Samadush, something stated in Olimar's description of the item. Unfortunately, this means that some interesting metaphors were removed.

069 - Harmonic Synthesizer
Some clacks were added. Clack.

076 - Time Capsule
Changed from a mighty time machine to a mere time capsule.

084 - Innocence Lost
A nice joke was added at the end of the final description.

089 - Vacuum Processor
The treasure's defects are much worse in the final script.

098 - Repair Juggernaut
The final script removes an insight into the Hocotate Freight business, a bonding product called "Fix Man".

107 - Tear Stone
The ship is pushier with his sales pitch in the final text.

115 - Pink Menace
The machine plays up the treasure's destructive capabilities a smidge more.

144 - Talisman of Life
Since this isn't a card, but a deck of cards, that part was changed. The Ship's metaphor for dying was also changed.

157 - Proton AA
The usability of this item's energy differs completely between scripts.

177 - Hypnotic Platter / Adults-only Emblem
The other half of this treasure's censoring.

178 - Massive Lid / Plain Lid
The demo script is a lot less interesting, matching the early treasure name, "Plain Lid".

185 - Geographic Projection
The range of this treasure's data was expanded greatly.

186 - Prototype Detector
A line about not bothering the treasure was removed.

187 - Five-man Napsack
Strange was changed to Bizarre for some strange reason.

198 - Flare Cannon
Just as Olimar's description was updated for the final script, this was as well.

The Other Changes
At least there's less of them this time.

124 - Crystallized Telekinesis
Spelling fix for "enpowered".

134 - Boom Cone
The spelling for "exhilirate" was corrected.

141 - Priceless Statue
Grammar fix.

150 - Cosmic Archive
Spelling fix for "worldy".

172 - Yellow Taste Tyrant
Yet another spelling correction.

179 - Pondering Emblem
Typo fix.

197 - Shock Therapist
Typo fixing.