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Warning 1: The majority of the following changes are slight rewordings, text reformatting, or typo fixes. As such, they are very boring. Only those with absolutely nothing left to do in their lives, or those with sentence restructuring fetishes should read through all of these entries. Skimming is advised.

Warning 2: If you do choose to read through all of these, it is highly likely that you will swallow your own tongue, or gouge your own eyes out, or vomit out several lesser demons. For maximum safety, please view the following text through a pinhole camera.

011 - Love Nugget
Since this isn't really a sack, the typo was fixed.

016 - Onion Replica
Hocotate uses its Japanese spelling in the demo description.

043 - Possessed Squash
Olimar's reaction to the treasure is stronger in the final script.

052 - Crystal King
Unhyphen-...dehyphen-...the hyphen was removed.

056 - Lustrous Element
Another instance of the Japanese "Hokotate" spelling.

060 - Milk Tub
This dialogue was punched up a tad.

064 - Decorative Goo
Typo fix.

080 - Joy Receptacle
Have have was fixed fixed, and Olimar's description of the Pikmin has more heart.

094 - Nouveau Table
This popular idiom was corrected. This is the correct way to use it. Take note, people.

112 - Essence of Despair
Grammar was fixing.

118 - Gemstar Wife
Spelling fix.

136 - Doomsday Apparatus
Another typo fix: "Artillary".

140 - Worthless Statue
Another typo fixed.

141 - Priceless Statue
Mother's Day is properly capitalized. The addition of ellipsis changes the tone of Olimar's last sentence.

153 - Memorable Gyro Block
Both versions spell accidentally incorrectly.

164 - Fruit Guard
"Cannister" was fixed.

170 - Optical Illustration
"Cilvilization" typo was fixed.

193 - Justice Alloy
Olimar doesn't refer to Emperor Bulblax as a species in the early script.

196 - The Key
"Theatens" cannot stage a mutiny.

If you read all the way to the end, and if you can indeed still read this, I am very sorry. This was a big mistake for both of us.