Proto:Pikmin 2/Space Mail

The President
The Treasure Hoard is referred to by an earlier name, Treasure List. and is no longer in capital letters.

The President's attempts to connect with the youth aren't present in the final message.

Another instance of "treasure list" instead of "treasure hoard".

Olimar's Wife
"Space-mail" changed to "space e-mail". Space.

The President
Rewritten to sound less awkward.

The President
"Debts" is no longer plural in the final text.

The President's previously mention of eating grass comes up again in the finalized message.

Olimar's Daughter
Grammar fixing.

The President
Hocotate Swamp was changed to a proper name.

Standard "debts" change.

Louie's Grandmother
Louie was changed from eating healthily to eating heartily.

Louie wasn't forced to walk in the final game.

Olimar's Son
The spam message that Olimar's Son talks about switched in the final version to be funnier.

Spam
The website was changed from nintendo.com to pikmin.com.

Website was changed again, and pokos was properly capitalized.

Olimar's Daughter
The final sentence was softened a bit.

Olimar's Son
Different sentence, but same sentiment.

Olimar's Son
"Behalf on" was corrected, and Pikpik was capitalized differently.

Spam
Standard website change, "happy" changed to "sappy", and an extra Pikpik was removed. Pikpik!