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Proto:Phantasy Star IV: The End of the Millennium/Gumbious Temple

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As the most important structure on Dezolis, there's really no need to persuade people to visit Gumbious Temple. Scenic.

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1st Floor

Dezolisian Priest May & August Scripts
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Here at Gumbious Temple,
we not only guarded the
'Eclipse Torch,' the object
of the Dezolisian belief,
but also we are the core of the
governmental system
.
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Final Script
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Here at Gumbious Temple,
we not only guard the Eclipse
Torch, the symbol of the
Dezolisian belief, but also we
are the central government.

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Dezolisian 1 May & August Scripts
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The 'Eclipse Torch' is a holy
flame.
The legend stats that it emits
a burning light that reduces any
'object unworthy of this world
to ashes.'
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Final Script
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The Eclipse Torch is a holy
flame.
The legend states that it emits
a burning light that reduces any
object unworthy of this world
to ashes.
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Dezolisian 2 May & August Scripts
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I once got terribly frostbiten.
But the light of
the Eclipse Torch,
cured me in moments!
That is truly a holy flame.
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Final Script
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I once got terribly frostbitten.
But the light of the Eclipse
Torch cured me in moments!
That is truly a holy flame.

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Dezolisian 1 May & August Scripts
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This is sacred Dezolisian area.
Usually many people come to
visit, but recently there's
been a snowstorm and visitors
are few and far between.

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Final Script
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This is a sacred Dezolisian
area.
Usually many people come to
visit, but recently there's
been a snowstorm and visitors
are few and far between.
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Basement

Dezolisian Priest May & August Scripts
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You may not go beyond this
point.
Please retreat.
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Final Script
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You may not go beyond this
point.
Please go back.
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After the Eclipse Torch is Stolen

1st Floor

Dezolisian 1 May & August Scripts
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Oh horrors!
Our holy flame has been Stolen!
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Final Script
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Oh horrors!
Our holy flame has been stolen!
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After Recovering the Eclipse Torch

1st Floor

Dezolisian Priest May & August Scripts
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Oh, you have reclaimed
the Eclipse Torch!
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Final Script
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Oh, you have recovered
the Eclipse Torch!
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Dezolisian 2 May & August Scripts
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Ah, I'm sure we can entrust
people like you with
the holy flame.
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Final Script
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Ah, I'm sure we can trust
people like you with
the holy flame.
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2nd Floor

Dezolisian 1 May & August Scripts
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Be it as it may I'm glad it
turned out well.
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Final Script
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I'm glad it turned out well.
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After the Garuberk Tower Disappears

Basement

Dezolisian Priest May & August Scripts
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Powerful waves of pure emotion
emanating from have
assaulted
this temple!
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Final Script
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Powerful wave of pure hate
assaulted this temple!

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Translation Notes
The Japanese term for the waves is "念波". This could translate to "wave of feeling/emotion", but in the case, should probably translate to "thought wave."

The final English draft changed the vague "emotion" to "hate", which at least makes sense in context.


Dezolisian Priest May & August Scripts
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Just when we though the dark
cloud was lifted and the malice
was gone...!
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Final Script
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Just when we thought the dark
cloud was lifted and the malice
was gone...!
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Dezolisian High Priest May & August Scripts
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So you are the people to whom
the Eclipse Torch was loaned.
I'm glad you're here.
The bishop is awaiting you.
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Final Script
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So you are the people who saved
the Eclipse Torch.
I'm glad you're here.
The bishop awaits you.
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Translation Notes
The high priest already knows that Chaz and the others have the Eclipse Torch -- he's the one who loaned it to them -- but the way the sentence (イクリプストーチをお貸しした方々じゃな) was translated makes it seem like he's just now learning about this.

The later English draft doesn't really fix this, but it doesn't make him seem more appreciative...one supposes.