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Proto:Phantasy Star IV: The End of the Millennium/Monsen

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This city has the misfortune of being in the path of a malfunctioning Plate System. Earthquakes abound!

Default

Exterior

NPCs

Middle Aged Woman 1 May Script
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I wonder what was behind those
earthquakes recently.
Maybe something bad
is going to happen...
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Final Script
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I wonder what was behind those
earthquakes recently?
Maybe something bad
is going to happen...
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Middle Aged Man 1 May Script
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You're asking about The Ladea
Tower?
Yes, I think it lies beyond the
peninsula to the east.
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August Script
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Have you seen the Ladea Tower?

It lies beyond the peninsula
to the east.
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Final Script
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Have you seen the Ladea Tower?

It stands on the peninsula
to the east.
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Translation Notes
The May line should be "It lies at the end of the peninsula to the east." They used the wrong meaning of "先にある" here - if it lied beyond the peninsula, it would be in the ocean. The final script fixes this, more or less.


Young Woman 1 May Script
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You're going to the peninsula?
There's a village called Termi
there, but...
because of the quicksand we
haven't been able to get there.
I wonder if they're OK?
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Final Script
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You're going to the peninsula?
There's a village called Termi
there, but...
Because of the quicksand we
haven't been able to get there.
I wonder if they're OK?
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Objects

Chaz May Script
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It says
'Danger: Cracks in the Ground
 No Trespassing'
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Final Script
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It says: 'Danger: Cracks in the
Ground No Trespassing'

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Residences

NPCs

Old Man 2 May Script
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My son and his wife used to be
living
next door, but...
They've up and left this town,
just abandoning us.
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Final Script
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My son and his wife used to
live next door, but...
They've up and left this town,
just abandoning us.
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Old Woman 1 May Script
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This is just between you and me,
My son's wife,
she's one deprived person!
Actually I'm quite relieved
that she's gone.
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Final Script
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This is just between you and me.
My son's wife,
she's one depraved person!
Actually, I'm quite relieved
that she's gone.
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Translation Notes
This is just a typo. The only thing she's deprived of is her step-mother's love.


Middle Aged Woman 2 May Script
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Hey, you.
Did you see the house next door?
I'm scared to death every time
an earthquake occurs,
thinking when this house is
going to be like that one!
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Final Script
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Hey, did you see the house next
door?
I'm scared to death every time
an earthquake occurs,
thinking when this house is
going to be like that one!
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Objects

Chaz May Script
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They should keep it a little
cleaner than this...
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Final Script
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What a mess!
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Chaz May Script
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'Child-Rearing Diary'...
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Final Script
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'Child-Rearing Made Easy.'
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Translation Notes
Thing went from a journal to an instructional book.


Chaz May Script
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Wow, incredible!
These are
all child-rearing
books.
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Final Script
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Wow, look at all these
child-rearing books.

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Tool Shop

Middle Aged Woman 1 May Script
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My husband is making cracks
in the wares so they would break
easily!
I am so ashamed, I just can't
face my neighbors!
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Final Script
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I can't believe my husband is
taking advantage of our friends!




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Translation Notes
Well that's peculiar. Her husband's wares aren't actually any different from normal tool shops, so that could be why this was changed. Makes him less sketchy than he should be, though.


Inn

NPCs

Middle Aged Man 2 May Script
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With all these earthquakes,
we won't get any customers.
Boo hoo...
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Final Script
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With all these earthquakes,
we won't get any customers.
sigh.
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Translation Notes
The inn owner is in slightly better spirits in the final English draft.


Hunter 2 May & August Scripts
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With all these sand worms...
The parents will not their
children play outside...
I guess they're just being safe.

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Final Script
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With all these sand worms...
The parents will not their
children play outside...
I guess they're just being
careful.
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Objects

Chaz May & August Scripts
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These must be so-called
supplies.
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Final Script
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These must be supplies.
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Translation Notes
Standard supplies change.


After the Plate System shutdown

Exterior

Young Man 2 May Script
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When the earthquakes subside,
I'll never again buy anything
from this store!
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Final Script
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Now that the earthquakes have
subsided
, I'll never again buy
anything from this store!
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Translation Notes
The earthquakes are over, so this man now speaks in the past tense.


Young Man 1 May Script
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I wasn't able to get
any peace of mind
what with the earthquakes,
but how quiet it is now!
It's so quiet,
it's almost eerie.
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Final Script
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I wasn't able to get any peace
of mind with all the
earthquakes, but how quiet it
is now!
It's so quiet,
it's almost eerie.
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Tool Shop

Middle Aged Man 1 May Script
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When the earthquakes stopped,
suddenly nobody came to shop
here anymore.
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Final Script
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Now that the earthquakes have
stopped, no one shops here
anymore.
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Middle Aged Woman 1 May Script
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This must be divine punishment!
You're really dumb...
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Final Script
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This must be divine punishment!
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Translation Notes
Too harsh?


After completing the Fissure of Fear quest

Residences

Middle Aged Woman 2 May Script
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Thank you for you help.
Since that incident, I'm always
keeping
my child close at hand.
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Final Script
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Thank you for your help.
Since that incident, I always
keep
my child close at hand.
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Chaz
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It's debatable if that's a good
solution.
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