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Proto:Shining Force II/Chapter 17

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Story

Dojo

Oh yeah, there's a dojo on the west coast. Behind that dojo is a waterfall. Under that waterfall is a naked nude woman with no clothes on. She notices the force.

Blank.png April Script
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Don't you know this is a
sacred place?!
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Final Script
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This is a sacred place!
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Astral
April Script
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She's too beautiful for
you. Back, back!
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Final Script
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She's too beautiful for you!
Back, back!
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png

Astral slowly pushes Bowie and Peter away, but stops when the woman recognizes him, confusing the codger

Blank.png April Script
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Oh, you've forgotten me?
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Final Script
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Oh...you don't remember me?
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Blank.png April Script
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I'm [Sheela], I was your
pupil at Galam. I was
preparing to become a priest.
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png
Final Script
Shining2DialogueBoxTop.png
I'm [Sheela]. I was a pupil
of yours in Galam. I was
preparing to become a priest.
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Astral
April Script
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[Sheela]! I can't believe
it! You were never so
charming!
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png
Final Script
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[Sheela]! I can't believe it!
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Translation Notes
This should be the last set of Astral's lascivious comments that needed to be toned down.
Blank.png April Script
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I know you have a scar on
your chest.
You sneaked up on my and
tapped my shoulder....
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Final Script
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How is that scar on your
chest.
Remember? You snuck up
behind me and tapped my
shoulder....
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png
Astral
April Script
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And [Sheela] kicked me
in the chest...and it left
a scar.
Nobody but [Sheela]
knows about the scar...Oh,
you became so beautiful!
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png
Final Script
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And you kicked me in the
chest...and it left a scar.
How could I forget.
Nobody but [Sheela]
knew about that scar....
It still aches sometimes.
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Blank.png April Script
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You're lewd as usual.
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Final Script
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I am sorry I kicked you.
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Translation Notes
The next five lines had to be rewritten due to lewdness and rudeness.
Astral
April Script
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Oh, I'm sorry.
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Final Script
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That OK. How have...
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Translation Notes
This rewrite, though? That not OK.
PeterP
April Script
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Were you this lewd when
you were young?
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Final Script
Shining2DialogueBoxTop.png
Hey, aren't you going to
introduce us?
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Astral
April Script
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Shut up!
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Final Script
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Of course.
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Astral strikes Peter, presumably. The screen shakes, at any rate.

Astral
April Script
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Do your bossiness.
By the way, why are you
here?
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Final Script
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All in good time.
By the way, what are you
doing here?
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Blank.png April Script
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To kill Red Balon.
He killed my fiance.
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June Script
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I came to kill the Red Baron.
He killed my fiance.
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Final Script
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I came to kill Red Baron.
He killed my fiance.
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Astral
April Script
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You said you were getting
married in your letters.
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Final Script
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Oh....
I'm sorry...
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Translation Notes
A nice little detail that was rewritten for some reason.

Sheela asks why Astral came back to Grans.

Astral
April Script
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To seal Zeon again.
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Final Script
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To reseal Zeon.
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The King of Devils?
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Final Script
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The King of the Devils?
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Astral
April Script
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He is destroying the
entire world. He must be
stopped!
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Final Script
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He'll destroy the entire
world. He must be stopped!
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Blank.png April Script
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Is Red Balon his follower?
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Final Script
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Is Red Baron his follower?
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...maybe.

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Ahhh....
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Final Script
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Ok! I'll do it!
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A monk outfit appears above the lake.

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Achooooo!
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Final Script
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Close your eyes!
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Sheela jumps out of the lake, does a flip, changes in mid-air and sticks the landing.

Sheela
April Script
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Sir Astral, please let me
go with you to defeat Zeon.
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Final Script
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Sir Astral, please let me go
with you.
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Astral
April Script
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We welcome you, but can
fight?
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Final Script
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We welcome you, but can you
fight?
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Yes; Sheela's a Master Monk now.

Astral
April Script
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You must've had quite a
bit of training!
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Final Script
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We could always use another
well-trained fighter!
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Sheela joins the force!

Sheela
April Script
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Many Galam soldiers are
there in the west.
Be careful.
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Final Script
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Many Galam soldiers are in
the west.
We must be careful.
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Northern Grans

Geshp
April Script
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Are you still alive?
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Final Script
Shining2DialogueBoxTop.png
You're still alive?
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Pan to Geshp, already standing in the middle of the field.

Geshp
April Script
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Unbelievable!
You're really have heart?
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Final Script
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Unbelievable!
You really are persistent.
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PeterP
April Script
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Shut up!
We cannot die 'till we
destroy all of you.
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Final Script
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We'll never stop!
We will not die until we
destroy all of you.
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Translation Notes
Maybe they could have changed to "shush up."

Geshp gives instructions to his troops, then escapes. Didn't see that coming from a mile away.

Astral
April Script
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I think Geshp needs time
to prepare his next trap.
After him now!
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Final Script
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Geshp sure is a tricky
devil.
After him, now!
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Translation Notes
Astral loses a bit of insight in the final script.

Roft

Teen Boy
April Script
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Galam! Galaaam!
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Final Script
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Galam soldiers! Run!
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He runs away.

PeterP
April Script
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No, no! We're not Galam
soldiers!
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Final Script
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No, wait! We're not Galam
soldiers!
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He comes back.

Teen Boy
April Script
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Oh, sorry. You're not
from Galam.
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Final Script
Shining2DialogueBoxTop.png
Oops. My mistake.
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Teen Boy
April Script
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Oh, it's easy. I can see
it your eyes.
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Final Script
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Oh, it's obvious. I can see
it in your eyes.
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We cut to Pedro's death scene already in progress. Pedro's lying in bed, with Paseran and an unknown woman by his side.

Teen Boy
April Script
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You promised me I'd fly
in the sky!
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Final Script
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You promised to fly me in
the sky!
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Father
April Script
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Oh, yeah...with the Nazca
Ship...I promised....
I'd fly home...to see my
family....
To show how wonderful the
ancient people were....
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Final Script
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I know...with the Nazca
Ship...I promised...
I'd fly home...to see my
family....
To show them how wonderful
the ancients were....
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Petro dies. As the group exits the room, Zynk fumes, stomping around angrily. Peter asks Astral what's wrong with him.

Astral
April Script
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I have no idea, but he's
so anxious!
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Final Script
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I have no idea, but he's
obviously disturbed!
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Zynk paces for a bit, then turns to face the force.

Zynk
April Script
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[Hero], Sir Astral!
I'm angry!
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Final Script
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[Hero], Sir Astral!
I am angry!
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Zynk
April Script
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I can't forgive the
devils! I...I...
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Final Script
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I cannot forgive the
devils!
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Zynk
April Script
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I've overridden my
restrictions on fighting.
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Final Script
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I have overridden my
restrictions on fighting.
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Zynk
April Script
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I'm joining your force as
a soldier!
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Final Script
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I am joining your force as
a soldier!
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Zynk joins the force!

Zynk
April Script
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Let's go defeat the devil
army!
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June Script
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Let us go defeat the devil
army!
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Final Script
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Let us go defeat the Devil
Army!
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Grans Tunnel

Time to put that dismembered golem arm to good use.

Blank.png April Script
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[Hero] put the Golem
Arm on Golem.
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June Script
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[Hero] put the Arm of
Golem on Golem.
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Final Script
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[Hero] put the Arm of
Golem on the golem.
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Claude
April Script
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That feels good...
My full power is back!
Thanks to you,
I can move again!
How can I express...
Oh, yes! I'll follow you!
I'll protect you!
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Final Script
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That feels good...
My power is back!
Thank you.
I can move again!
How can I express...
Oh, yes! I'll join you!
I'll protect you!
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png

Claude protects the force!

Now that the tunnel to Parmecia is open, the force returns to visit Creed, because they just decided they wanted to, okay?! Geeze.

Creed's Mansion

The mansion's in disrepair, Oddler is missing, and Creed's gone. What happened here?

Sailor
April Script
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Oddler regained his
memory and suddenly he
went berserk.
He had a fearful face.
But my master seemed to
understand everything.
He fell to the sea to stop
Oddler.
Is Mr. Creed alive?
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Final Script
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Oddler regained his memory
and suddenly went berserk.
He had a fearful face,
but my master seemed to
understand everything.
He fell into the sea to stop
Oddler.
Is Mr. Creed still alive?
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png

The other three potential force members have grown back to their normal size, so that's a positive.

Eric...

Eric
April Script
Shining2DialogueBoxTop.png
My room was broken into
and I returned...
They rushed out, but I
couldn't catch them...
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Final Script
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I really want to find the
legendary magic sword....
But I can't do that if I'm
stuck here.
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Translation Notes
Eric went from trying to be helpful to being a sword-obsessed goon.

...Randolf...

Randolf
April Script
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I was surprised to find I've
returned to my original
size!
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Final Script
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I was surprised to find I
had returned to my original
size!
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...and Tyrin join the force!

Oh, and if for some reason Eric is turned down...

Eric
April Script
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No? Then I continue my
search for the legendary
magic sword.
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June Script
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No? Then I'll continue my
search for the legendary
magic sword.
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png
Final Script
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No? Then I'll continue my
search for the legendary
magic sword alone.
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png

That didn't happen though. Now, back to the plot.

Prism Flower Field

Geshp
April Script
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You came earlier than I
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Final Script
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You're early.
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Translation Notes
The June script uses the final line, but is missing the "button prompt" control code.

Pan to Geshp standing in his usual spot.

Geshp
April Script
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expected.
But, don't worry. I just
finished my work.
Now to welcome you.
It's show time!
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png
Final Script
Shining2DialogueBoxTop.png
Darn you, Granseal swine!
But, don't worry. I just
finished my preparations.
Yes...everything's ready.
It's show time!
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Translation Notes
There's no button prompt after the first line in the June script.
PeterP
April Script
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Sir Astral...why is he
smiling?
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Final Script
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Sir Astral, why is he smiling?
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Astral
April Script
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He believes this is the
place were we'll die....
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June Script
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He believes this is the place
were we will die....
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Final Script
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He believes this is the place
where we will die....
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It isn't. Turns out that stationary flowers aren't the ultimate embodiments of power, even if they shoot lasers.

Geshp
April Script
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Prism Flowers...
Shoot!
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Final Script
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Prism Flowers?
My Prism Flowers!
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Geshp
April Script
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[Hero], I shall
return with Red Balon!
You'll pay for this!
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png
Final Script
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[Hero], I shall return
with Red Baron!
You'll pay for this!
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png

Galam Field

And another battle. Zeon and Geshp are pulling out all the stops to keep the force from progressing, as well they should.

Geshp
April Script
Shining2DialogueBoxTop.png
How are you today,
[Hero], Astral?
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Final Script
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Now you shall pay for killing
my precious Prism Flowers.
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Translation Notes
More instances of the greater devils' dialogue being rewritten to fit a specific personality.

Pan to...the obvious.

Geshp
April Script
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You look well.
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Final Script
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Hee, hee, hee.
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Peter asks where the next trap is.

Geshp
April Script
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Come on, [Peter],
I'm not such a bad guy.
I just want to introduce
you to my friend.
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png
Final Script
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Would I do that?
I just want to introduce you
to my friend.
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Geshp
April Script
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Red Balon, say hello!
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Final Script
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Red Baron, say hello!
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Red Baron, a familiar-looking crimson-clad cloaked centurion, says hello in mumblese.

Geshp
April Script
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See his red armor?
It's smeared with blood.
He has killed so  very many
people.
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Final Script
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See his red armor?
It's smeared with blood.
He has killed so very many
people.
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Geshp
April Script
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Now, see you later.
I look forward to seeing
you again.
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Final Script
Shining2DialogueBoxTop.png
Now, it's your turn.
This will be your undoing.
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PeterP
April Script
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Sir Astral, he's crying....
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Final Script
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Sir Astral, he's...crying!
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Astral
April Script
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I think...I've seen his way
of fighting before.
Let's see his face.
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Final Script
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I think I've seen his style
of fighting before.
Let's see his face.
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png

Astral removes the mask. Now let's see who the mass-murdering madman REALLY is!

Astral
April Script
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It's you, [Lemon]!
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Final Script
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It's [Lemon]!
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Lemon's limp body glows with an unholy light, bringing him back to life!

Lemon
April Script
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Oh, Sir Astral! I...
had a nightmare....
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Final Script
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Oh, Sir Astral! I had an
awful nightmare.
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Sadly, it wasn't a dream.

Lemon
April Script
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What?
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Final Script
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What?!
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Astral
April Script
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You were controlled by a
devil.
And he made you kill every
person you saw.
You recovered your senses
because we defeated the
devils.
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Final Script
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You were being controlled
by a devil.
And he made you kill every
person you saw.
You recovered your senses
when we defeated the devils.
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Lemon
April Script
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Ah, what should we do?
How should I atone for my
sins.
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Final Script
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What can I do?
How can I atone for my sins?
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Astral
April Script
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You're not to blame.
It's not your fault. The
devils are to blame.
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Final Script
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You're not at fault.
It's not your fault.
The devils are to blame.
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Lemon
April Script
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But, but...
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Final Script
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But...
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Lemon
April Script
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I have to die for them.
It's my atonement.
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Final Script
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I have to die for my sins.
It will be my atonement.
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png

Lemon flees to Galam. Peter wonders if Astral's just going to let him die.

Astral
April Script
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[Lemon] is an immortal
vampire now. He can't die
so easily.
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Final Script
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[Lemon] is an immortal
vampire now. He can't die
very easily.
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png

And on that cheery note, the force returns to Galam.

Area Dialogue

Dojo

Only three monks talk in the Dojo, and this is the only one with text differences.

Monk
April Script
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We, master monks are
dedicated to mental
research!
We train ourselves to
approach gods.
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Final Script
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Monks are dedicated to
studying the powers of the
mind.
We train very hard.
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Translation Notes
Possibly rewritten due to religious reasons.

Roft

Hey, the Mithril that the force has been collecting might not be useless after all.

Sailor
April Script
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Nobody but the Dwarven
Blacksmith can work upon
Mithril.
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June Script
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Nobody but the Dwarven
Blacksmith can work upon
Mithril.
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png
Final Script
Shining2DialogueBoxTop.png
Nobody but the Dwarven
Blacksmith can work with
Mithril.
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png

In France, he's known as Le Balon Rouge.

Sailor
April Script
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Red Balon is a cruel
killer.
His armor has been
smeared with blood.
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png
June Script
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Red Baron is a cruel killer.
He has smeared his armor with
with blood of his enemies.
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png
Final Script
Shining2DialogueBoxTop.png
Red Baron is a cruel killer.
He has smeared his armor with
the blood of his enemies.
Shining2DialogueBoxBottom.png

How did Petro get back, anyway? The answer may surprise you.

Father
April Script
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The devils kidnapped Mr.
Petro and stole Nazca
Ship.
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Final Script
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The devils kidnapped
Mr. Petro and stole the
Nazca Ship.
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Paseran mourns the death of his mentor.

Teen Boy
April Script
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(sob...sob...)
You're gone...
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Final Script
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(Sob...Sob...)
He's gone....
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After exiting and reentering the town, both Paseran and the unknown woman's dialogue change.

Teen Boy
April Script
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The Nazca Ship was broken?
I hope Petro gets on the
Nazca Ship in heaven.
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Final Script
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The Nazca Ship crashed?
I hope Petro gets on the
Nazca Ship in the great
beyond.
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Translation Notes
This was definitely rewritten due to religious reasons. We have the trifecta of no-nos here:
  • Astral's lewdness.
  • Religious references.
  • Telling people to shut up.
Teen Girl
April Script
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The devils lied then they
killed Petro.
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Final Script
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The devils lied, and then
killed Petro.
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Standard shop sign changes.

Blank.png April Script
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Various Weapons
...Shopkeeper
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Final Script
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Various Weapons
-Shopkeeper
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Blank.png April Script
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Various Tools
...Shopkeeper
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June Script
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Various Tools
-Shopkeeper
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Final Script
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Various Items
-Shopkeeper
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(Source: Original TCRF research)