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Proto:Super Mario Sunshine/Text Changes

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This is a sub-page of Proto:Super Mario Sunshine.

While the text is the same for the most part, there are some subtle changes and corrections that were made between the demo and the game's release. Most of these changes are from the international demo, but the Japanese demo has a few changes as well.

FLUDD Dialogue

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Careful of

that sludge!

Spray it!
Be careful of

that sludge!

Spray it!
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They are dividing into many units!! They are dividing into smaller units!
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You've got

to do something

about that big tongue!
You have to

do something about that

big tongue!
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Remember to

take good care of

your teeth!
Remember to

take proper care of

your teeth!
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It seems

someone is lacking in proper

training...
It seems that

someone is lacking the proper

training...
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Why don't

you try grabbing the tail and

snapping it?
Why not try

grabbing the tail and

snapping it?
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Well, they

don't seem to like

bathing...
Well, they

do not seem to like

bathing...
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Maybe we

should try to tilt the

bathtub...
Maybe we

should try to tilt the

hot tub...
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That appears

effective! Just do that four

more times!
That seems to

be effective! Just do that four

more times!
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Juh-just

two m-more

times, Mario!
J-Just

two m-more

times, Mario!
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You have

obtained a water rocket! Use it to pop a

balloon!
You have

obtained a water rocket! Use it to

pop balloons!
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Only two

more runs of the track to go! Do your

best, Mario!
Only two

more laps of the track to go! Do your

best, Mario!
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We're on our

last time around! But there's still quite a few

left...
This is our

last time around, and there are still quite a few

left...
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Last time

around! There are only a few left!

Get them all!
Last time

around! Only a few remain!

Get them all!
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Spray it water

and try to upset the

balance!
Spray it with

water and try to upset the

balance!
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You can refill

me anywhere there's water. Just press > to fill

my tank.
You can refill

me anywhere there is water. Just press > to

fill my tank.
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If you jump

against a wall and press @, you can do a

wall jump!
If you jump

against a wall and press @, you can perform

a wall jump!
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You can press
  1. while in

the water to dive. But watch your

life meter!
Press #

while you are in the water to dive, but watch your

life meter!
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He's escaped

into the graffiti! Mario! Try spraying it

with water!
He escaped

into the graffiti! Mario! Try spraying it

with water!
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Press @

while you are motionless in the water! You will then

jump out.
Press @

while you are motionless in the water to

jump out!
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Press 

to get a good look at what's right in

front of you!
Press ¥

to get a good look at what is right in

front of you!
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Use the

Control Stick to change where you're

looking!
Use the

Control Stick to change where you are

looking!
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Try kicking off

two walls in a corner to complete a triangle-

shaped jump!
Try bounding

off two walls in a corner to complete a triangle-

shaped jump!
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When you

can't see what's ahead of you very well, try

pressing !
When you

cannot see what is ahead of you very well, try

pressing <!
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If you hold

down > until it clicks, you'll stand still while you

squirt water!
If you hold

down > until it clicks, you will stand still while you

squirt water!
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You can press

and hold > to build up power in the Rocket Nozzle

and launch!
Press and

hold > to build up power in the Rocket Nozzle

and launch!
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Press and

hold > to power-up the Turbo Nozzle and do a

super dash!
Press and

hold > to power up the Turbo Nozzle and do a

super dash!
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It seems the

Yoshi is hungry! Try pressing # near fruit to

feed him.
It seems that

the Yoshi is hungry! Try pressing # near fruit to

feed him.
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He's headed

for the square! Go

get him!
He is heading

for the square! Go

get him!
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If you want

to shoot water while running, press

> lightly!
If you want

to shoot water while moving, press

> lightly!
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Press # to

flip this

fence gate!
Press # to

flip this

gate!
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Use a ground

pound to flip through this

fence gate!
Use a ground

pound to flip through this

gate!
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This is one of

my nozzles, the... Oh, it's a hologram. You cannot

use it yet...
This is one of

my nozzles, the... Oh, you cannot use it yet. It is only

a hologram.
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This is one of

my nozzles, the E. Gadd Scientifics

Hover Nozzle!
This is one of

my nozzles, the Gadd Science, Inc.,

Hover Nozzle!

Save Message

International

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Insert a Memory Card in Slot A. Insert a valid Memory Card in Slot A.
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This data is corrupt. Erase data? The data is corrupt. Delete data?
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This data is corrupt.

Do you want to overwrite

this data?
The data is corrupt.

Do you want to delete

this data and save?
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The Memory Card in

Slot A is not for this market and must be formatted.

Format now?
The Memory Card in

Slot A is formatted for

another market. Format now?
Proto Final
Creating file...


Do not remove the Memory Card or turn

the POWER Button OFF.
Creating file...

Please do not touch the Memory Card or

the POWER Button.
Proto Final
Could not save.

The Memory Card in

Slot A is damaged.
The Memory Card in Slot A

is damaged and cannot be used. Insert another Memory Card or press the A Button to continue

without saving.
Proto Final
Could not save.

There is not enough room on the Memory Card in Slot A. This game requires 7 blocks

per save file.
There is insufficient space on the

Memory Card in Slot A. Super Mario Sunshine requires 1 file and 7 blocks to save. Insert another Memory Card or press the A

Button to continue without saving.
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Could not save.

The Memory Card in Slot A cannot be

used with this game.
The device in Slot A is not supported.
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Could not save.

This data is not

the final saved data.
Unable to save to Memory Card

in Slot A. Please insert the original Memory Card or press the A Button to continue

without saving.
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Could not save.

The Memory Card in Slot A does not have

data for this game.
The Memory Card in Slot A is

incompatible with the Super Mario Sunshine save file. Insert another Memory Card or press the A Button to continue

without saving.
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Error. A file may not have been created. Error... No file has been created.
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An error may have

occured during

formatting.
Error... Formatting failed.
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An error may have occured during saving. Save failed.
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Formatting...

Do not remove the Memory Card or turn

the POWER Button OFF.
Formatting file...

Please do not touch the Memory Card or the

POWER Button.
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Saving...

Do not remove the Memory Card or turn

the POWER Button OFF.
Saving file...

Please do not touch the Memory Card or the

POWER Button.
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Where do you want to save? Save to which file?
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Continue from Delfino Plaza Continue
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Formatting complete. Formatting successful.
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You've made friends with Yoshi! Make him eat with #. You befriended Yoshi! Make him eat with #.

Japanese

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セーブできません。

このデータは ゲームスタート時と

おなじものではありません。
セーブできません。

このデータは さいごにセーブした

データではありません。
Proto Final
ターボノズルを ゲット!

>おしっぱなしで

こうそくダッシュ だ!
ターボノズルを ゲット!

>おしっぱなしで

スーパーダッシュ だ!

System Messages

International

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Banana. Coconut. Pineapple. Durian. ...bananas! ...coconuts! ...pineapples! ...durians!
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Well? Are you going to do it or what? Well? Are you going to do it, or what?
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I need some... Bananas. Coconuts. Pineapples. Durians. I need some... ...bananas! ...coconuts! ...pineapples! ...durians!
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Not even close.

Go practice and

come back later.
Practice up and come back later.
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You can exchange those

for ��� � Shine Sprite.

Would you like to?
I can exchange those

for Shine Sprites. I'll give you ��� �, yes?

Would you like to?

In the demo, there is no space between the number of seconds to complete the box minigame and the word 'seconds'.

Japanese

The Japanese demo actually has its error messages, which were replaced in the final game.

Guide Map

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Steep cliffs and sea

beds are what the Nokis call home. The huge waterfall and 3 soaring towers resonate with their

mystic history.
Steep cliffs and sea

beds are what the Nokis call home. The huge waterfall and three soaring towers resonate with

mystic history.
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These mountain folk

are strong, social and curious. The trees on their heads provide relief from

the island's heat.
These mountain folk

are strong, sociable, and curious. The trees on their heads provide relief from

the island's heat.
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Nokis wear vibrant

seashells reminiscent of their time living in the coral reefs. Their timidity masks

sparkling intellects.
Nokis wear vibrant

seashells reminiscent of their time living in the coral reefs. They are timid but

highly intellectual.

Load Message

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This data is corrupt.

Do you wish to overwrite

this data?
This data is corrupt.

Do you want to delete

this data?
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This data is corrupt.

Do you want to overwrite

this data?
This data is corrupt.

Do you want to delete

this data?
Proto Final
Do you wish to overwrite this data? Overwrite data?
Proto Final
Copying...

Do not remove the Memory card or turn

the POWER Button OFF.
Copying file...

Please do not touch the Memory Card or the

POWER Button.
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Erasing...

Do not remove the Memory Card or turn

the POWER Button OFF.
Erasing file...

Please do not touch the Memory Card or the

POWER Button.
Proto Final
The Memory Card in

Slot A cannot be

used with this game.
The device in Slot A is not supported.
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The Memory Card in

Slot A does not

correspond to this game.
The Memory Card in Slot A

is incompatible with the

Super Mario Sunshine game.
Proto Final
An error may have occured during copying.

An error may have occured during the creating of the file. An error may have occured during the erasing of the file.

An error may have occured during formatting.
The Memory Card in Slot A is damaged and cannot be used.
Proto Final
Saving.

Do not remove the Memory Card or turn

the POWER Button OFF.
Saving file...

Please do not touch the Memory Card or

the POWER Button.

Episode Name

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ひがしの どうくつの ヒミツ がけのうえの どうくつの ヒミツ

Bianco Hills Episode 1

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You seemed like you

were in such a hurry

when I saw you last.
You seemed like you

were in such a hurry

last time I saw you.

Minor change in wording to sound less awkward.

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That's a nice little

squirt-tank you got there, sonny!

Why don't you water the flowers a bit...

They sure need it!
That's a nice little

squirt-tank you got there, sonny!

Why don't you water the flowers a bit?

They sure need it!

A change in punctuation to alter the tone of the message to be a request rather than an indirect command.

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You may be able to

get through at the

waterwheel up ahead.
You might be able to

get through at the

waterwheel up ahead

A minor word swap, but when the change was made, someone accidentally removed the period at the end of the sentence!

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You may have the

others fooled, but I

see right through you!
You might have fooled

the others, but I see

right through you!

Another may/might swap, as well as a bit of rewording to flow better.

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Never fear! Just get

up there and bounce

around. You'll be OK.
Never fear! Just get

up there and bounce

around. You'll be fine.

A minor change, as the word "OK" stands out too much.

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From here on, things

are really dangerous!

So no fooling around!
From here on, things

get really dangerous!

So, no fooling around!

A minor word change, as well as some added punctuation.

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Hey, old guy. Who are you? Hey, old-timer. Who are you?

Hey, old guy!

For the sign that points to Ricco Harbor and Pinna Park, there are two extra spaces in front of the arrows in the demo, which were removed for the final. This change is also present in Episode 2.

Bianco Hills Episode 2

International

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The goop's taken care

of, but now that big

windmill's in trouble...
The goop's taken care

of, but now, that big

windmill's in trouble...

An added comma.

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I know it's a pain...

You think you can

handle it?
I know it's a pain,

but...you think you

can handle it?

A conjunction was added to make more sense.

Japanese

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あれれ?

さっき おおきな ふで みたいなモノを かかえて はしっていったのは あんたじゃなかった?

こんどは おもたそうな きかいを かついで

いろいろたいへんねぇ・・・
あれれ?

さっき おおきな「ふで」 みたいなモノを かかえて はしっていったのは あんたじゃなかった?

こんどは おもたそうな きかいを かついで

いろいろたいへんねぇ・・・

Ricco Harbor Episode 1

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Huh?! You think the

arrows are pointing

that way on purpose?

Ruh-ruh-really?
Huh?! You think the

arrow is pointing

that way on purpose?

Ruh-Ruh-Really?

The mention of arrows was changed to singular, making the Pianta who speaks this line only refer to the arrow sign he is standing next to. Also, capitalization in the last sentence was changed.

Gelato Beach Episode 2

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I'll have you know

that if you use the

Dune Buds wisely...

you can reach

heights you never

would normally.
I'll have you know

that if you use the

Dune Buds wisely...

...you can reach

heights you never

would normally.

An ellipsis was added at the beginning of the second block to make it more clear that the sentence is continuing.

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Whew! Long plan! Whew! What a plan!

The plan isn't really long, just the description of it is.

The signs for the Surf Cabana and Sand Cabana were accidentally switched in the demo. This was corrected in the final version. This error is also present in Episode 3.

Gelato Beach Episode 3

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N-n-now calm down

there, m-m-mister

caterpillar!
N-N-Now, calm down

there, M-M-Mister

Caterpillar!

Another capitalization change, in the same vein as the one in Ricco Harbor. "Mister Caterpillar" is also capitalized, since it is supposed to be used as a proper noun.

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I think you get rid of

that bug by stomping

on it's belly.
I think you get rid of

that bug by stomping

on its belly.

The dreaded it's/its mix-up.

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Anyway, go show that

caterpillar what-for!

Gaah ha ha ha!
Anyway, go give that

caterpillar what for!

Gaah ha ha ha!

A minor change in wording for this excited chap.