Prerelease:Paper Mario

This page details prerelease information and/or media for Paper Mario.

To do: NOM interview with developers translated to English Another interview, from an unknown source Page from Nintendo Official Magazine 64 - January 1998 (UK) Logo circa E3 2000: [1], [2] (Maybe try to find a cleaner version if possible)

Paper Mario went through many phases of development, initially beginning as a sequel to Super Mario RPG. Before it was called Mario Story in Japan and Paper Mario internationally, it took on various names throughout development, including Super Mario RPG 2 and Super Mario Adventure.

(Source: GameSpot Paper Mario Preview)

1997

March

After Intelligent Systems was chosen to make a sequel to Super Mario RPG, the team had issues figuring out how to make the game thematically different from the main series Mario games. The team broke into three groups that worked in parallel to create sample models. Naohiko Aoyama, a new employee at the time, ended up creating a rough image during his downtime that involved 3D models but looked like a picture book transplanted into a video game with paper-thin 2D backgrounds and characters. Aoyama conceived of this art style by going against the trend of realistic 3D graphics; instead, he thought it would be interesting to use the 3D capabilities of the N64 to further emphasize a 2D game.

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  The image Aoyama submitted, dated March 5, 1997, featured a world of paper-thin characters in a 3D environment.

(Source: Iwata Asks: Paper Mario: Sticker Star)

November

Space World 1997

Consoles Coverage

At the convention, Paper Mario was said to be released in 1998 for the Nintendo 64DD under the title, "Mario RPG 2." A build was shown off featuring an art style very different from the final game's, such as Mario having more pronounced eyes before being changed to plain black dots. It was covered in the January 1998 issue of Consoles, a French gaming magazine.

Translation

MARIO RPG 2 Officially announced, the new episode of the RPG featuring the little plumber will release in 1998 on DD64. While the first Super Mario RPG was developed by Square, this new episode is now in the hands of Nintendo. We're immediately impressed by the technical level of how the game is coded. The game looks 2D, but is actually 3D. All the on-screen elements are as flat as paper (à la Parapa on Playstation). When they move, they act like paper in the wind! The effect is stellar and gives a new aesthetic to the game. We don't know much about the story yet, but our plumber will be once again living a difficult and exciting quest. A lot of people found that the game seemed to be aimed towards children. It is early to jump to this conclusion because Miyamoto promised a RPG as big as Yoshi. The overall pastel effect gives a very childish look to product of high technicality. And if the sprites can bend like pieces of paper, they twist and contort in every way. An effect that was already experimented on the stage select screen in Yoshi's Story. It seems to be possible to rotate the background. We're waiting for the game with a badly contained impatience, especially since in early '98, Nintendo should reveal the innovations of this Mario RPG 2, holding to the DD64 support. You have a bad feeling about this forest? Be careful! Mario's long time friends are also part of this adventure. The star world will lead you to new, never seen before lands. Some of the classic Mario bosses are recognizable. 2D Mario evolves in his completely 3D house.

Screenshots

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  Mario in a house, eavesdropping on something going on outside.

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  Mario outside of a house with a Toad.

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  Mario atop a rock near a ledge connected by two long bridges. Poochy, who is absent from the final game, can be seen on the left.

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  Mario walking along a log bridge with a Nep-Enut protruding from the water. Nep-Enuts are not present in the final game.

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  Mario in a dark forest featuring dead trees with faces. It's possible this area turned into Forever Forest.

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  Mario in a more detailed dark forest, seemingly about to receive something. The overall design looks very similar in concept to Forever Forest. In the distance there appears to be a pair of cherries.

(Source: Unseen64)

(Source: Super Mario RPG 2: Legends of Localization)

1998

Spring

Early Build

This build more closely resembles the final game. The art style is further along, with Mario looking almost identical to his appearance in the final game. Partners are present for the first time, with Goombario and a generic Koopa Troopa being the only two shown.

Overworld The HUD in both screenshots is significantly different from the one in the final:

• On the upper-left is an empty yellow square. In battles, this seems to indicate the current action Mario is taking.
• To the right of the square is a heart, which likely indicates Mario's HP, as it's larger and resembles hearts from the final in one of the screenshots.
• Underneath is the set of actions Mario can take. In order: Jump, Hammer, Item, and an unknown glove icon.

Prerelease	Final

Mario in Goomba Village with the Koopa Troopa partner. Nearby is Goombaria, as well as the Goomba family's house.

• The Goomnut tree is to the left of the house and not the right.
• There are no flower boxes in front of the house.
• The Toad House is nowhere to be seen.

Prerelease	Final

Mario and the Koopa Troopa partner in an early Mt. Rugged next to another Koopa Troopa. In the final game, no generic Koopas appear in Mt. Rugged.

Battles Battles at this point use a similar system to Super Mario RPG. Unlike the final game, partners are AI controlled and fight on their own, requiring no player input for their actions.

There are notable aspects to these battles:

• The diamond layout of the available actions looks borrowed from Super Mario RPG, with Items on the left, Jump on the top, Hammer on the bottom, and an unknown glove icon on the right. It's possible these were chosen with the C-buttons on the N64 controller, as they have the same layout.
• There is a bar near each enemy, which likely represents their health.
• Mario's partner is positioned differently in battle, being closer to the camera and closer to Mario. In the final, the Partner has the same Z position and is a bit further behind Mario.

Prerelease	Final

Mario in battle against two Koopa Troopas. He's using Hammer, the icon for which is filled into the yellow square on the upper-left.

• The action command for Hammer seems to involve timing a button press, while the final's involves holding left on the control stick until the fourth light on the HUD turns on.
• The icon for the cursor also doesn't look like anything present in the final game.

Prerelease	Final

Mario and Goombario in battle against Red Goomba.

• Red Goomba is sitting atop a spring, which doesn't happen in the final. He also appears to have 5 HP rather than 7.

Prerelease	Final

Mario and Goombario in battle against the Goomba King.

• The Goomba King has no allies, looks slightly different, and is further away from Mario. He also appears to have 14 HP instead of 10.
• The tree in the background doesn't resemble the Goomnut Tree in the final Goomba King battle and doesn't have a bandage.

(Source: Nintendo: Super Mario RPG 2)

(Source: Unseen64)

Summer?

Later Build

Screenshot

This build looks nearly complete, with the art style mostly finalized and some of the game's locales completed. This build shows signs of a completed battle system design, with FP and Star Points present.

• Backgrounds are more detailed and are starting to resemble the style used in the final.
• The HUD was changed again, showing a portrait of Mario on the upper-left with his HP and FP to the right in a blue rounded rectangle. One heart and flower is shown for what looks to be every 4 units of HP and FP, respectively, that Mario has; the HUD scales accordingly. The hearts on the HUD jump up in a playful way.
• Total Coins and Star Points are displayed on the bottom-right of the screen on the field and after a battle. The font for them is also different.

Prerelease	Final

Mario and Goombario in Koopa Village.

• The background is a more simplistic version of the one used for Goomba Village and the surrounding area.
• A number of textures were redone.

Prerelease	Final

Mario and Goombario fighting a Goomba and Spiked Goomba. The selection cursor looks the same, and based on Mario's stance, he appears to be using Jump.

Prerelease	Final

Mario using Hammer on the Goomba King, who is accompanied by the Red and Blue Goombas. Hammer's Action Command is faintly visible on the left side of the image.

• The Action Command looks complete and greatly resembles the final. The HUD for it is transparent, which could indicate it being inactive/unusable (as Mario normally doesn't have Action Commands at this point in the game).

Video

Notable aspects:

• The Fuzzy minigame music and Tutankoopa's battle theme have slightly different arrangements, and sound like they're recorded from MIDI playback on a Roland SC-88 Pro, rather than from an in-game mix.
• 0:00 - There is a large red pipe seen in Goomba Village, with what appears to be "POST" next to it. A Save Block can be found in this exact spot in the final, and Super Mario RPG used a similar method of saving, so there's a chance these were the original save points.
• 0:04 - Goombaria can be seen following Mario in Goomba Village. Goombaria is an unused partner in the final version.
• 0:08 - Mario has different, more exaggerated, expressions. This is noticeable when Kammy Koopa blocks off the exit to Goomba Village.
• 0:11 - Mario has a different animation upon landing from a jump attack.
  • Enemy HP is displayed in a vertical bar, with small hearts representing the number of HP.
  • The star shown when dealing damage rotates rapidly, and the color of the number indicating the amount of damage dealt is a red-pink gradient.
• 0:15 - Goombas give 7 Star Points. In the final game, they give 2 at most.
  • Star Points accumulated are displayed on the bottom-left with the number accumulated displayed above them.
  • Mario gives an exaggerated victory sign after winning a battle, similar to Super Mario RPG. In the final version, he gives a thumbs up.
• 0:17 - The red "!" indicating if you can interact with something is smaller and static, and is a 2D sprite. It also appears above Goombario's head. The final features a 3D rotating "!" that appears over Mario's head.
• 0:19 - There are other Koopas inside Koopa Koot's house. In the final game, only he occupies it.
• 0:23 - There is no breakable block after the bridge in Pleasant Path.
  • The area's background is brighter and less detailed.
• 0:28 - A Goomba disappears after touching Mario in the overworld, as if it was defeated by the Bump Attack badge. In the final game, enemies that are defeated in the overworld go into their death pose before they vanish.
• 0:29 - Another large red pipe replaces the Save Block at the start of Flower Fields.
  • Flower Fields has different colors and scenery, involving more red and featuring fewer flowers and what appears to be a broken tree.
  • No Bub-ulbs are present in Flower Fields.
  • Bombette's appearance is drastically different: she's smaller, shinier, and looks more like a standard Bob-omb.

1999

August

Space World 1999

A build shown at Space World 1999 is very close to the final, with many aspects fully completed. The show's official press release states that the game was halfway complete at this point, with an expected release date of January 2000. Rough drawings of Kooper, Parakarry, and Lakilester were included, along with several screenshots. Interestingly, several of the in-game screenshots from various media show different builds with minor variations.

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  Early artwork of Kooper.

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  Early artwork of Parakarry.

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  Early artwork of Lakilester.

Prerelease	Final

The title screen shown in this build, featuring a different version of the final game's world map with animated clouds. The game is still called Super Mario RPG 2 this late into development, with the copyright date given as 1999.

Prerelease	Final

Mario and Goombario in Toad Town.

• The sign reads "Mushroom Kingdom" instead of "Kinoko/Toad Town." There is a town with the same name inSuper Mario RPG.
• The pipe to Mario's house is missing, as is the lamppost.
• The water has a reflection, which isn't present in the final.
• There is a tree next to Russ T.'s that isn't in the final game.
• The townsfolk are scattered around a bit differently, and there is no Toad couple by the pond.

Prerelease	Final

An early version of the cutscene that introduces the Koopa Bros. Bowser has a more intimidating appearance, and the Koopa Bros. are smaller and look younger.

Prerelease	Final

A battle involving Mario and Kooper versus a Koopa Troopa and a Goomba. This looks much closer to the final.

• The HUD displays Mario's HP differently, seemingly using large hearts to represent groups of 5 HP and small ones to represent the remainder.
• The font on the HUD is thinner and italicized.
• Underneath Mario's HP is the word "POW".
• Star Energy is noticeably missing.
• The "HP" and "FP" text are above their respective icons and are much smaller.
  • Above the Star Points and Coins icons is the text "SP" and "Coin," respectively.
• Mario's battle options are laid out differently. From top to bottom, the options seem as follows: Run Away, Party, Jump, Hammer, Items.
  • The Jump icon is flipped.
• Enemy HP is displayed differently, with individual hearts for each HP they have.
  • Goombas and Koopa Troopas have 3 HP. In the final version, they have 2 and 4 HP respectively.
• The stage backdrop shown is not used by this enemy formation in the final game.

Prerelease	Final

Mario obtaining a Red Berry in Flower Fields.

• The text box has a plaid-looking texture and is higher up.
• There is no item description at the bottom of the screen.

Prerelease	Final

An early pause menu shown. Part of the text for this can still be found in the Japanese version.

• Mario is at Level 0, which is not possible in the final.
• The HUD is still shown in the pause menu.
• There is a unique animated background. The final instead uses the previous frame on the overworld as the background texture.
• The menu is organized vertically rather than horizontally.
  • In order, the menu items are: Badges, Items, Party, Memo, Map, and Options.
  • The "Memo" option is absent from the final game, but description text that was left in suggests it held information gathered from a "knowledgeable Toad" (Russ T.?)
  • "Map" is in kana (ちず), unlike the final game which renders it in kanji (地図).
• Total play time is not recorded.
• Star Energy is absent.
• HP and FP are grouped with the information on the right.
• Coins are not on the menu.
• Mario's current Hammer and Boots are displayed differently.
• Above the Star Piece counter is a mysterious "Power Capsule" listing. It's not clear what this was for, but judging by leftover text for a similar-sounding "Power-Up Capsule" item, it may have been an early version of the final game's Super Blocks, or even The Thousand-Year Door's Shine Sprites.
• The main part of the menu seemingly shows how much BP and max BP Mario has.

Prerelease	Final

Early Japanese	Translation	Final Japanese	Final English
仲間を　えらぼう！	Select a party member!	どのなかまに　かえる？	Switch to which member?
チャキチャキした　ボム兵の　オンナのコ バクハツで　かべとか岩を　はかいできるよ	An industrious Bob-omb girl. She can explode to demolish walls or rocks.	(C▼)を　おすと　バクハツして ヒビのある　カベや岩などを　こわせる	Press (C▼). She'll explode and destroy cracked walls or rocks.

The Party Member menu.

• All partner icons are flipped in the final.
• There is no icon for the active partner. In the final version, the active partner's name is grayed out.
• The menu header uses the English word for party (パーティ) instead of the Japanese equivalent (なかま, nakama). The description's use of "nakama" is in kanji (仲間) rather than kana.
• Bombette's description incorporates part of her pause menu profile, and doesn't give any indication of which button to press for her ability.

Prerelease	Final

Peach's Castle. The only time a similar view of the castle can be seen in the final is during the epilogue, in which Mushroom Kingdom residents can be found and the camera is zoomed in more.

Prerelease	Final

Mario using the hammer in Flower Fields. Mario has the Super Hammer here, which isn't possible in the final game. The HUD has text that says "LIMIT" under the HP counter.

Prerelease	Final

To do: Twink's bulky sprites are still present in the final game, but are they used?

Peach and Twink in the castle library.

• Twink looks slightly bulkier than in the final game.
• The windows in the back are shaded using a diamond gradient. The final game changed this to a simpler linear gradient.
• The top book in the book stack directly left of the potted vase is more to the left.
• There are no Koopatrols patrolling.

Video

The footage in the video contains a significant number of differences from the final.

• 0:02 - Kolorado's house is shown.
  • There is a blue vase that was removed in the final version.
  • The chair was also redesigned and moved to the left in the final version.
  • Kolorado's wife has a green shell instead of a red one.
• 0:06 - An exclamation mark appears above the head of a Toad, who starts running towards Mario like an enemy. In the final, there are no enemies in Toad Town, and no Toads do this during normal gameplay.
• 0:14 - There doesn't seem to be a way to switch Mario and his partner's turn. It's possible partners were still AI controlled at this phase in development.
• 0:19 - The text for the Hammer Action Command is a bit different from what's seen in the final game. The text also disappears when Mario performs the Action Command.

Early Japanese	Translation	Final Japanese	Final English
[stick] を [star] が光る時にはなそう！	Release [stick] when [star] lights up!	[stick] を左に引いて [star] が光ったときに　はなそう！	Push [stick] to the left and release it when [star] lights up!

• 0:28 - Parakarry doesn't flap his wings fast during his field ability. His field ability also slightly descends over time.
• 0:31 - In addition to the early description for Bombette noted in the screenshot above, there are two for Goombario and Kooper:

Early Japanese	Translation	Final Japanese	Final English
物知りな　クリボーの　オトコのコ いろいろなことを　おしえてくれるぞ	A knowledgeable Goomba boy. He'll tell you about various things.	(C▼)を　おすと　今いる場所のことや 近くにいる人や　物のことを　おしえてくれる	Press (C▼) to have him tell you about everything nearby.
じんぎにあつい　ノコノコ コウラをけとばして　アッタクできるぞ	A Koopa Troopa with a strong sense of justice. He can attack with a kick of his shell.	(C▼)を　おすと　とおくの物を　とったり スイッチを　おしたりできる	Press (C▼) to reach an item a short distance away.

• 0:38 - Bombette flies upward more slowly after she uses her field ability.
• 0:40 - The Koopa Village shop has a different item order.
  • In the footage, the order is: Mushroom, Volt Shroom, Honey Syrup, Fire Flower.
  • The final game's order is: Dizzy Dial, POW Block, Fire Flower, Honey Syrup, Volt Shroom, and Mushroom.
• 0:45 - Pleasant Path's background has similar scenery with a different art style.
  • The area around the bridge that forms from a switch is more detailed, lacks a sign, and has an additional fence on the left.
• 0:46 - Mario uses a Toad House.
  • The Toad House bed does not have sheets or a comforter and the window folds down as the vignette closes in.
  • Goombario moves beside the bed. In the final version, Mario's partner jumps into his pocket before he gets into bed.
• 0:50 - There is a green Toad instead of a blue one by the station.
  • The sign by the station looks different.
  • The conductor is faintly visible at the start of the scene and looks to be wearing a non-traditional Toad hat, more akin to the conductor in the sequel, The Thousand Year Door.
  • The camera rotates to show a side view of the train much later.
  • The train is smaller and less detailed.
• 0:52 - There is no Lil' Oink pen or Toad in the pen's vicinity.
• 0:53 - The camera is rotated slightly downwards.
  • There is no sun ray effect.

(Source: Super Mario Wiki, Space World 1999 guidebook and website)

2000

The build shown off at E3 2000 is very close to the final game. Most differences are merely small changes to the text (footage starts at 2:02:39):

• A few kanji glyphs appear here that seem to have been removed from the font and replaced with their kana equivalents in the final Japanese version. These include 兵 ("soldier") and 押 ("to press").
• 2:02:42, 2:02:46 - Waza (Abilities) is in hiragana (わざ) and not katakana (ワザ).
• 2:02:47-48 - Power Shell costs 2 FP instead of 3 FP.
  • It and Shell Toss have slightly different descriptions:

Shell Toss

Early	Final
てき1体を　体当たりで　こうげきする	てき１体で　コウラで　こうげきする
Ram into an enemy.	Throw a shell at an enemy.

Power Shell

Early	Final
[地?]面にいる　てき全体を　こうげきする	地上にいる　てき全体を コウラで　こうげきする
Attack all enemies on the ground.	Throw a shell at all enemies on the ground.

• 2:02:49 - Toki ("when") is rendered in kanji (時) instead of kana (とき):

	Japanese	English
Early	[stick]を左に引いて⍟が光った時に　はなそう！	Push [stick] to the left and release it when ⍟ lights up!
Final	[stick]を左に引いて⍟が光ったときに　はなそう！

• 2:03:28 - Part of Green Ninjakoopa's dialogue appears to have been rewritten:

Early Japanese	Final Japanese	Final English
うおっ　マリオ！		Yeeek! Mario!
どうせ　おまえなんか　[オレ?]たちの ところまで　くるなんて　できないぜ！ へへ～ンだっ！ Even so, you still won't make it to our room! Ha haa!	しか～し！ オレたちのところまで　これるかな？ Buuut! Will you find your way to our room, I wonder?	You, uh... Don't try any... You'll still never find your way through this fortress!
うぅ～ん　たたかいの　けはい このシゲキがたまらないね	うぅ～ん　たたかいの　けはい このシゲキが　たまらないね	Umm... It looks like there might be some fighting here. How exciting! See ya!

Oddly, the English line is closer in meaning and tone to the early one, so a more literal translation of the final line has also been provided.

• His last line is the same, but lacks the space between このシゲキが and たまらないね.

• 2:03:38 - The jingle for being hit by a First Strike is completely different.
• 2:04:40 - Mario's "danger" pose is different. Here he is more slouched and keeps his head down, with the hat covering his eyes.
• 2:05:05 -
  • The badge pickup jingle is completely different.
  • Power Bounce's description was slightly reworded:

Early Japanese	Translation	Final Japanese	English
アクションコマンドを　しっぱいするまで てきを　何回も　ふみことができる	Jumps on one enemy a number of times until you miss an Action Command.	アクションコマンドを　しっぱいするまで てきを　れんぞくで　こうげきできる	Jumps on one enemy continuously until you miss an action command.

• 2:05:29 - The "locked door" message is less assertive in nature:

Early Japanese	Translation	Final Japanese	English
カギが　かかっていっるので あかない・・・	It's locked, you can't open it...	カギが　かかっていて　あかない！	It's locked! You can't open it.

• The text is also centered in the dialogue box.

• 2:05:36 - The POW Block description was also tweaked. Translation-wise, there is no real difference:

	Japanese	English
Early	てき全体に　２ダメージを　あたえ さらに　コウラのてきを　ひっくりかえす	Flips shell enemies and inflicts 2 damage points on all enemies.
Final	てき全体に　ダメージを　『２』あたえる さらに　コウラのてきを　ひっくりかえす

• 2:06:09 - A slightly earlier level up screen.
  • Interestingly, the "Level Up!" text is in romaji rather than kana, using the same graphics as in the English version.
  • The HP heart lacks highlights when not selected.
  • Again, waza (in the FP description) is in hiragana.
  • The blue text box is larger and placed above the stats (obscuring the "level up" text), and uses black text with a white outline. In the final game, the text is white, smaller, and baked onto the texture:

Early Japanese	Translation	Final Japanese	English
どれを　パワーアップしますか？	Which will you power up?	アップさせたいものを　ひとつ　えらぼう	SELECT ONE TO UPGRADE!

• 2:06:08 - The switch reveal jingle is completely different.

The footage from 2:07:32 onward appears to be B-roll from much earlier in development:

• 2:07:32, 2:07:42 - Shooting Star Summit and Toad Town Tunnels use the main Toad Town theme.
• 2:07:47 - The pipe entry sound is different, and does not play on the other side.
• 2:07:58 - Gloombas (ヤミクリボー, Dark Goombas) are referred to as Underground Goombas (ちかクリボー) here.
  • For whatever reason, this Spiked Gloomba is labelled "Santa" (サンタ).
• 2:08:05 - The counter suffix referring to the number of enemies is in kana (たい) and not kanji (体) as in the final game.

	Japanese	English
Early	てき１たいを ずつきで　こうげきする	Headbonk an enemy.
Final	てき１体を　ずつきで　こうげきする

• 2:08:08 - When Goombario hits the Buzzy Beetle, a very small star appears (instead of a large one), along with the message "No Hit" (ノー　ヒット). A similar-looking "No Hit" graphic also shows up, unused, in The Thousand-Year Door.
• 2:08:24 - The Pokeys (サンボ) are referred to as Yellow Pokeys (きいろサンボ).
• 2:08:32 - Goombario's jumping is accompanied by sound effects.

Unknown

Video

To do: Find the source of the video.

This build appears to be later than the one shown at Space World 1999.

• The battle HUD does not show any text for any of the stats.
• The Fire Flower deals 2 damage instead of 3.
• The POW Block deals 1 damage instead of 2.
• The pipe sound is different.
• A different music track is played at Mario's House and Star Hill.

Text

Several later screenshots showcase text that was rewritten or otherwise has no final equivalent:

Early Japanese	Translation	Final Japanese	Final English
ピカピカかみなり　ドカンと落として 敵全体に　３ポイント　ダメージ	Flashy lightning that strikes with a bang. Does 3 points of damage to all enemies.	かみなりを　てき全体に　おとす こうげき力は『５』	Lightning that strikes all enemies. Attack Power: 5

• Mushrooms (キノコ) were once known as Recovery Mushrooms (かいふくキノコ).
• Thunder Rage's early description says it does 3 points of damage rather than 5.

Japanese	Translation
マリオめっ！ ピーチ姫を　助けるために ワガハイのところに　くるつもりなのだな！	Mario!! So he's planning to storm my place and save Princess Peach, is he?

Japanese	Translation
こうこがくは　コツコツと　地道な じょうほうあつめが　だいじなのだよ	Steadily and tirelessly gathering data is a major part of archaeology.

Prerelease	Final

Early Japanese	Translation	Final Japanese	Final English
攻撃を　うけた！	You were hit by the attack!	せんせいこうげきを　うけた！	You're hit by the First Strike!

• The text box is off-center.
• The Paratroopa is closer to the area's entrance. In the final version, there is a regular Koopa Troopa by the entrance instead, with a Paratroopa farther in.
• "Attack" is rendered in kanji (攻撃) and not kana (こうげき) as in the final game.

Prerelease	Final

Early Japanese	Translation	Final Japanese	Final English
あなたが　もとめる　さがしものを かれいに　うらない　さがすことが わたしの　こうきな　つとめ	My noble calling is to read fortunes while looking absolutely ravishing. I can help you look for what you seek.	あなたが　もとめる　さがしものを かれいに　うらない　見つけることが わたしの　こうきな　つとめ	My noble calling is to read fortunes while looking absolutely ravishing. I can help you find what you seek.

• Merluvlee is on the other side of the room, and there is no crystal ball on her table.
• The only difference in the text is the use of さがす (search) instead of 見つける (locate).

Early Japanese	Translation	Final Japanese	Final English
もし　おのぞみとあらば わが道場に　ちょうせんすることも できますぞ	If you have the purpose and the desire, you may challenge my Dojo.	もし　おのぞみとあらば ワシらに　ちょうせんすることも できますぞ	If you have the purpose and the desire, you may challenge us.

Early Japanese	Final Japanese	Final English
このあたりが　とりでの中心部みたいだ いろいろ　しかけも　ありそうだしさ	このあたりが　とりでの中心みたいだ いろいろ　しかけも　ありそうだしさ	This seems to be the central area of the fortress. This area looks extremely suspicious to me.

The early line calls the room the "central area" (中心部) of the fortress. The final line takes out the 部, rendering it closer to "center". The English line unwittingly hews closer to the early script, which shows how minor a change this is.

Early Japanese	Translation	Final Japanese	Final English
そういえば　この部屋のどこかに ひみつのぬけ道が　あるってことを いぜん　だいじんが　話していたわ	The Minister once told me that there was a secret passage out of this room!	そういえば　この部屋のどこかに ひみつの　ぬけ道が　あるって だいじんが　話していたことが　あったわ	I remember the Minister telling me that there was a secret passage out of this room!

The sentence was slightly reworded, in a way that doesn't affect its general meaning.

Early Japanese	Translation	Final Japanese	Final English
手紙を　とどけるのが　おしごとなのです	My job is to deliver letters.	こんにちは わたし　パレッタと　いいます 手紙を　はこぶ　しごとを　しています	Greetings. The name's Parakarry. I deliver letters.

Interestingly, the final Japanese line changed "deliver" (とどける) to "carry" (はこぶ). The English version seemingly reverted this, which, again, illustrates how the overall gist remains the same.

Early Japanese	Translation	Final Japanese	Final English
マリオさん　おねがいします 力をかしてください！	I beg you, Mario! Please lend me your strength!	だから　そのコウラを　とりもどすのを マリオさんに　てつだってもらいたいんス おねがいしやス	So if you don't mind, can you help me get my shell back? I'm begging you!

Aside from the text being entirely rewritten, Kooper doesn't appear to have his signature verbal tic of ending sentences with ス here.

Early Japanese	Final Japanese	Final English
ちなみに　げんざいの　あなたの せいかいもんだい数は　[#]もんで～す じかいも　ガンバって　くださいね	ちなみに　げんざいの　あなたの せいかいもんだい数は　[#]もんで～す じかいも　がんばって　くださいね	You've correctly answered [#] question[s] so far. Good luck next time!

Another minor tweak: がんばって (good luck) went from being rendered in katakana to hiragana. The meaning doesn't change at all.